The rain came down in sheets, pounding against my windshield faster than the wipers could clear it. I was driving home from my late shift at the hospital, exhausted after twelve hours of monitoring patients in the ICU. Three years as a nurse had taught me to handle emergencies with calm efficiency, but nothing prepared me for what happened that night.
Since Sarah left, taking our daughter Lily with her, the house had felt too big, too empty. We’d separated eight months ago, though the divorce wasn’t yet final. I still wore my wedding ring sometimes, a habit I couldn’t seem to break. The accident two years ago had changed everything between us—the one where I’d been driving through a storm just like this one.
I almost didn’t see him.
A figure at the roadside, thumb extended, drenched to the bone. Something made me slow down. Maybe it was the medical professional in me, worried about hypothermia on this unseasonably cold April night. Or maybe it was just that the lonely stretch of road reminded me of how isolated I’d felt lately.
I pulled over.
He climbed in quickly, water cascading from his dark jacket. “Thanks,” he said, his voice oddly familiar. “Didn’t think anyone would stop in this weather.”
“Where are you headed?” I asked, turning the heater up.
He hesitated for a moment too long. “724 Oakwood Lane.”
My hands tightened on the steering wheel. That was my address.
“You sure about that?” I asked, trying to keep my voice steady while stealing glances at him. His face was partially obscured by the hood of his jacket, water still dripping from it.
“Yeah,” he said. “I’m… house-sitting for a friend.”
I swallowed hard. “What’s your friend’s name?”
Another pause. “Daniel Taylor.”
My name.
The car suddenly felt too small, the air too thick. I considered pulling over, telling him to get out, but something stopped me. Curiosity, maybe. Or fear of what he might do if confronted.
“I’m Mark,” he said, offering no last name. “Really appreciate the ride. Got caught in this storm walking back from the convenience store.”
The convenience store. The one I’d stopped at just twenty minutes ago to buy a bottle of Tylenol for my persistent headache.
“No problem,” I managed to say. “I’m… I’m heading that direction anyway.”
“Bad night to be out,” he commented, looking out the window. “Reminds me of a night I’d rather forget.”
My palms were sweating now. The accident two years ago had happened on a night exactly like this one. I’d swerved to avoid a deer, hydroplaned, and crashed into a tree. I’d been fine, but the trauma had lingered, manifesting in nightmares and a fear of driving in heavy rain.
We drove in silence for a few minutes, the only sound the rhythmic swish of the wipers and the drumming of rain on the roof. I kept my eyes fixed on the road, trying to think clearly. Who was this man? What did he want with my house?
“Mind if I use your phone?” he asked suddenly. “Battery’s dead on mine.”
I handed him my phone, watch him from the corner of my eye as he dialed a number. My phone showed no outgoing call. His thumb was pressed against the screen, but he wasn’t actually dialing.
“Hey, it’s me,” he spoke into the silent phone. “Yeah, I got a ride. Should be there soon.” He pretended to listen to a response. “Okay, see you then.”
He handed the phone back. That’s when I noticed the scar on his wrist—identical to the one I had from the accident, when glass had sliced my arm open.
My heart hammered in my chest. “So, uh, how do you know Daniel?” I asked, trying to keep my voice from shaking.
“Old friend,” he said vaguely. “Known him for years. He’s going through some stuff right now.”
I nodded, not trusting myself to speak.
“His ex-wife left him,” Mark continued. “Took their daughter. He blames himself, though it wasn’t really his fault.”
A chill ran down my spine. I hadn’t told anyone at work about Sarah leaving. How could this stranger know these details?
We were getting closer to my neighborhood now. I needed to decide what to do. Drop him off somewhere else? Confront him? Call the police?
My phone buzzed with a text. Keeping one hand on the wheel, I glanced down at it.
From Sarah: Lily wants to know if you’re still coming to her recital tomorrow? She misses you.
“Your daughter?” Mark asked, having clearly seen the message.
I nodded stiffly.
“Kids are resilient,” he said. “But they need their parents to be honest with them.”
I turned onto my street, heart pounding. The houses were dark, everyone asleep at this hour. Only my porch light was on, a habit I’d kept since Sarah and Lily left, like a beacon guiding them home.
“You can drop me here,” Mark said suddenly, before we reached my house.
I pulled over, relief flooding through me. “Are you sure? It’s still pouring.”
“I’m sure,” he said. Then, with his hand on the door handle, he turned to look at me fully for the first time.
My blood ran cold.
His face was my face—but wrong somehow. Older, harder, with dark circles under the eyes and a faint scar along the jawline I didn’t have.
“What are you?” I whispered.
He smiled sadly. “You know who I am, Daniel. You just don’t want to admit it.”
“I don’t understand,” I said, but a part of me was beginning to.
“Two years ago, you didn’t swerve to avoid a deer,” he said. “You fell asleep at the wheel. You’re still there, Daniel. Still in that car.”
I shook my head violently. “No. That’s not true. I survived that accident.”
“Did you?” he asked softly. “Then why do you keep driving this same stretch of road, in this same rain, picking up versions of yourself? Why do you always end up back at the beginning?”
I looked out the windshield. We weren’t on my street anymore. We were on the highway, approaching the curve where the accident had happened.
“This isn’t real,” I whispered.
“Parts of it are,” he said. “Sarah and Lily are real. They’re waiting for you to wake up.”
“Wake up?” My voice was barely audible over the rain.
“You’re in a coma, Daniel. Have been for two years. But you’re fighting to stay in this dream because you’re afraid of what you’ll find when you wake up. You think Sarah will blame you. You think Lily will be afraid of you.”
I gripped the steering wheel, knuckles white. “If this is a dream, why are you here?”
“I’m what you could become,” he said. “If you wake up and face what happened. If you stop running from the truth.”
Ahead, I saw headlights approaching in the distance.
“You have a choice to make,” Mark said. “You can keep driving this road forever, or you can wake up and go home to your family.”
The headlights grew brighter. I realized with horror that they were in my lane, coming straight toward us.
“This isn’t how it happened,” I gasped. “There was no other car.”
“There is this time,” Mark said calmly. “Because you’re ready to see the truth.”
The approaching car was milliseconds from impact. I could see the driver now—a woman, eyes wide with terror, trying desperately to swerve.
Sarah.
I jerked the wheel hard to the right—
And woke up gasping, the steady beep of a heart monitor beside me. A hospital room. Different from the one I worked in.
Sarah was asleep in a chair beside the bed, Lily curled up in her lap. They were here. They had been here all along.
My hand trembled as I reached out to touch Sarah’s arm. Her eyes fluttered open, confused at first, then widening in shock.
“Daniel?” she whispered. “Daniel, can you hear me?”
I nodded, unable to speak around the tube in my throat.
She burst into tears, carefully shifting Lily to the chair as she stood up. “Doctor!” she called into the hallway. “He’s awake! My husband is awake!”
As doctors and nurses rushed in, I caught sight of my reflection in the window. For just a moment, I thought I saw someone else looking back at me—a man with my face but older, nodding in approval before fading away.
Sarah squeezed my hand. “You’re home,” she whispered. “You’re finally home.”
But as the room filled with medical staff checking my vitals, a nurse paused by my bed. “That’s odd,” she said, frowning at the monitor.
“What is it?” Sarah asked, concern creeping back into her voice.
“The readings…” the nurse began. “They don’t make sense.”
Outside, rain began to fall, pattering against the window. A storm was coming.
And somewhere, on a dark road, a man was driving home.